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March 11, 2010

Could It Be Better?

Category: Poetry – Tags: , , , , , – Anna M – 9:51 am

I’m walking down the beach,

After a long summer day.

The cold sand squishes between my toes,

And the cool breeze blows through my hair.

The sun is setting,

And glorious colors are splashed in the sky.

What a beautiful sight to see,

A postcard worthy scene.

But I can’t help but think,

Would this walk be better,

If I had someone to walk with,

Or a hand to hold?

5 Comments »

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    Anna, I love this poem. It truly expresses what a perfect summer day is. And I don’t think it could get much better.

    Comment by Sam W. — March 12, 2010 @ 9:41 am

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    Hey Anna! I reallyliked your poem. The imagery in your poem is making me excited for this summer when we can go to the beach. :)

    Comment by Michaela A — March 12, 2010 @ 1:20 pm

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    Aw. Anna this is the cutest poem ever(: good job

    Comment by Tristen L — March 19, 2010 @ 8:08 am

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    Thanks guys :)

    Comment by Anna M — March 19, 2010 @ 9:22 am

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