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There is no end to the troubles

Escape attempts have been futile. Ryan does have two other guys with him, Drew and Mike, the two guys that attacked Marco at the beginning of the story. But then the three of them try and team up with Marco to escape but no success. Ryan and Shay continue to build there relationship. Drew does ask who she is and tell him “my girlfriend”. No hesitation at all.

Lexi finally finds out what is going on. She was able to pry the secret out of her mother, who admits it is her fault. But she will continue to fight that she at the same time is not to blame. But Lexi doesn’t care. She makes sure that she keeps herself clean along with her newfound friends.

Shay is still at constant battle to keep her family safe. It seems that she finally gets it that even though Ryan does truly care, we will not set forth his entire effort to help her family to, but she does still like him none the less. Ryan and his friends do find another opportunity to escape. A couple of guys are down in the parking garage that are about to attempt to ram their cars through this wired door that is blocking the exit. There seems to only be plastic on the other side. He tells Shay to meet her there, but she never does show up. They start up the cars to prepare to leave. As they start the convoy and head towards the door they continue to speed up. As the first car hits the door it just smashes the front end and flips the car. The 2nd car behind it hit the car and the third one that Ryan is in Steers out of the way and rolls. Nobody gets to hurt but they all get caged up right in the garage. But Drew is able to create enough of a whole in the cage that Ryan is able to slip out of the cage and take out the guard. He gets the keys and helps everyone else escape.

Later Marco runs down to the garage with Shay. They are gone but Marco grabs the walkie-talkie from the guard and his master key.

Ryan and all the others from the caravan wonder to through the mall towards the rock wall. But he is feeling sick. He has a fever and is very dehydrated. They go inside a sporting goods store where a man threatens to kill him. Eventually Mike is able to sneak up behind him and shoots him with a gun. He had stolen it from the cop without anybody else noticing. Ryan then passes out.

Shay and Marco stay together. Marco still does like shay but she does not feel the same way. They head towards the first aid area to check on her grandmother. She was getting even more and more sick. As she gets there she sees that her little sister is still ok. But soon her grandmother’s machines have a freak-out and doctors take her away. Shay and her sister freak out. Marco stays with them. Now Shay and her sister are starting to feel sick also but do not dare to tell the doctors. Soon another riot starts up and this time it is headed towards them at the first aid center. The doors break through and the people start to break in. Shay gets knocked onto the ground and is trampled. Marco carries her to safety.

Ryan wakes up. He is covered in blankets. He drinks some water and they start to think of a new way to escape. Ryan looks at the rock wall and thinks of an idea. There is a skylight right above it. They hook themselves up and everybody climbs up to the top and smash the glass. Many people at the bottom cheer. As Ryan climbs on top of the building a helicopter comes down upon them.

Shay wakes up and finds her sister. She is safe. She demands a doctor that was left behind in the riot to take her to her grandmother. As they pass through rows of dead bodies they see her body on a bead cold and stiff. She has also passed away.

The Senator sneaks away from everyone. She goes towards the ice rink that has been closed do to a malfunction in the coolant. As she opens the door it is plenty cold. She turns on the lights and sees hundreds of dead bodies.

This is the end.

Posted in English 11.


Trapped in the mall

The book “No Safety in Numbers” is very amazing so far in my opinion is very amazing. The author Dayna Lorentz seems like an author that I would read more of.  The book again I will state has been a very good read.

The story is given in the eyes between four teenagers, two boys and two girls, all of the same age, but very different lives. One of the boys is named Marco and he is Mexican. The only reason I do state this is because he is attacked and bullied for it a bit. But as he is being chased in the parking lot of the mall trying to get to work he hides in a janitor room. He quickly looks into one of the air ducts to hid in. As the coast is clear he sees a small machine in it. “That can’t be good” he said and then called 911.

You then meet Lexi who is the daughter of the state senator. Her mother the senator never seemed to care anymore but her father did. Lexi was a bit nerdy like him. Her and her family are at the mall trying to eat a lunch when for the millionth time her mother’s cell phone rings. But this time it seems bigger then usual. “Her expression changed…. “The found what?” She quickly ran out from her family after that.

Then you meet Ryan. He is a jock but pretty cool at the same time. Not some meat head like the rest of them. He is just looking around the mall at random. He goes into a store and looks into a rack and finds a girl inside that is just reading a book and listening to music. Her name is shay; She has a henna tattoo of a rose wrapping around her neck then blossoming on her cheek. He finds her very attractive but at the same time knows that she is different. Somewhat of a no no for him. But that’s just another thing that makes her attractive. Her being different and a little bit off limits. Only because she is not the same as everyone else. But then the mall is on lock down all of a sudden; Nobody is allowed to leave. She asks him to come with her to find her grandmother and little sister. She walks towards the entrance to the parking garage. They are not even to leave the store that they were in. there were to guards at the doors but he followed anyway even though he might get into trouble. The guards yell at them even as shay pleads to be allowed to go through. As they are forced to walk away shay gets a text from her grandmother saying that they were at the food court. As Ryan leaves her because he is afraid of getting into more trouble Shay gives him her number and the book she was reading full of poetry.

Shay you then get to follow in the book as she heads towards her family. She is upset for many reasons. One that she is confused about her feelings for Ryan, two that he kind of bailed on her because of the guards and three because she just gave him the book of poetry that was over  fifty years old that she had just recently received from her grandmother. As she is thinking about all these things she comes up to the the food court and sits down with her grandmother and watches her little sister play.

I am really enjoying this book because the mall is just getting worse and worse. Lexi’s mom gets even more distent. Marco trys to keep figuring out the truth. Shay’s grandmother is getting sick, possibly from her diebities, and Ryan is caught between shay and his friends, and other kids he rivals. Lexi does gain a new friend and Marco does learn new info. But much more has yet to get figured out. Now hazmat suited people are in the mall getting blood samples from people. Things are not looking good.

Posted in English 11.


Book Reveiw

The Catcher in the Rye is a very well-known book. When I first saw it I was excited to grab it. However I was not ready for how depressing it was going to be. Throughout the entire book I could just feel myself becoming more and more depressed with the main character in it. Not only is he depressing but on every page it seemed there was always some moment when he was swearing.

The main character’s name was Holden Caufelid. Throughout the entire book he just keeps becoming more disappointed with life. Everything around him will at first give him some hope but then he will just get disappointed with every action and thought and everybody else and himself. It starts out with him getting expelled from his school and this is not the first one that this has happened. He is used to dealing with this and it does upset me. I am not the best student. My grades are not pretty at all. But I do try. It just takes me a while to really get going. But once I do motivate myself there will be nothing that stands in my way. I truly don’t see whey Holden doesn’t see it that way too. All he does really in the end is makes mistakes, picks stupid fights, and ruins his good time in life.

You will very easily see this happening throughout the entire book. He fights with his roommate that wasn’t truly dong anything wrong. Holden just had to have him mind set on that everything in the world had no good true reason. Later when he runs off he gets a whore. Big mistake right away, because all that happened is that he felt crumby, didn’t do anything, paid her and she left.

Throughout the entire book he feels alone. He keeps thinking about one of his old friends that he was in my opinion was truly in love with. He just keeps trying to find distractions that will help him through the pain. He constantly keeps going out places and buys food and drinks. He sometimes/commonly is able to get served alcohol even though he is still a teen.

He thinks about his little sister a lot also. That makes me happy because I am an older brother also. If I am gone for a week from my house I will wonder what they are up to and hope that they are having a good time.

After more wondering around town he goes home. This is where I really get happy and sad. He finds his sister at their place. She is overjoyed to see him. He explains to her why he fails school. After being able to be with her for a while he tells her that he is leaving again. She demands to go with but her is able to make her stay. He sleeps like a homeless man for a night. He breaks down somewhere along the way. He goes home again then. At the end he just says that he is getting psychiatric help and that he will be going back to school in the fall.

Posted in English 11.


So Long CE9

This year was unimaginable. I don’t think I can really tell you how I felt throughout this year. Cyber-English was a great class. I learned so many new things and I think I became a better student to.  Because of this class I have accomplished so much and I know that what I have learned here might and probably will help me in the future.

Throughout this year I have learned many things in this class. Many things that I have learned this year will help me throughout high school and after it. With learning on how to build my blog I learned how to be more technically efficient. I am able to build a whole new blog and change how it looks and what is inside of it.

My grammar has grown throughout this year and so has my writing. After almost every “and” in my writing I would put a comma. Obviously that is not correct. I also learned that in this class I can write almost whatever I want to say. I have written that so many times in my blog but I still find it awesome. In most classes you can’t say what you truly think without getting downgraded.

A big change that I have found this year that surprised me is my reading habits. I used to never read. after we read speak I found more books by the same author that were great. I never really enjoyed reading that much for a while. I think it is important to find a book once in a while and really find one that you will enjoy.

 Writing is something I have always kind of enjoyed, but never really took a good swing at it. At first I saw how many mistakes I was really making but than I was able to fix them and continue. I now not only write for my blog but I also write my own stories and poems. I really do enjoy writing. It is something anyone can do when they are bored and they want to get the random and creative ideas out of there head. And if you put them on paper or save them on a computer they could become something useful possibly one day.  

 The best book I read this year was Twisted by Laurie Halse Anderson. She also wrote the book speak that we read in class which I also enjoyed very much. Twisted was full of possible real life drama. That is why I loved it so much. It was written mostly for teens and that might be another reason why. The real life drama that I read about in the book I could have easily found in school if I looked. It was real true pain and having a fantastic story line with it too.

I was not really ever nervous about making a blog. I was very excited when I found out we would be building our own. The only thing I was worried about was keeping up with what we needed to do and put into it. I eventually found out that that would not be too much of a problem. Building my blog was very fun and I am very happy we did it.

Having a wiki does not really affect how I learn. When we first started I was very excited to build and make it. When we first started it I was a little confuzzled. Once I was able to catch up on the project it just wasn’t what I thought it would be. It was still a great thing to do though because it got me to learn something I probably never would have. It really didn’t affect my learning that much though and I really don’t use it at all now.

Now that I look back and see all the things I have written and learned I just cant believe it. This class was nothing like any other English class I have ever taken. I would just like to say thank you to Ms. Degenhardt and Ms. Hogue for teaching me this year. They are wonderful teachers and for all you Freshmen next year I promiss you all will like them.

Posted in Cyber Journal.


Newspaper Project

EXTRA!!! EXTRA!!! Read all about it. Macomb Times is the cheapest paper of price.

Posted in To Kill A Mockingbird.


I’m Done

I read the book Catalyst by Laurie Anderson. For my genre piece I wrote a poem that shows how Kate acts and feels through the novel. Through my poem I hope you will understand the pain that Kate lived with during her last year of  high school having so many obsticals in her way.

I guess this is it,

I’m done with the pain,

There is more fight left inside me,

I’m done playing your childish games,          

There is no more reason to cry or shout,

Because my heart is telling me to just get up and walk out,

Love and laughter is all that I need,

So just leave me alone for I do not need,

Any yelling or screaming in my life anymore,

Because my heart is to tired, it’s just another chore,

Why is the earth filled with envy and greed?

While we sit around looking for a plea,

Bargain with god, its never going to come,

So we do it ourselves, that’s what will make us strong,

Helping others whenever I get the chance,

Even when I do not get to dance,

For the joy that I deserve,

Even though I get shot down I still get up,

Death is just so absurd,

Why kill a little boy with a plan,

To grow and be what ever he wants to be,

Unlike his mom, who is not lucky to be,

Just like mine, life is just ugh,

I’m done, I’m out!

But then I turn around because I still feel I need to help out.

Posted in Catalyst.


My Helpful Reviews

When writing a blog post I always put myself into what I say. My friend Jessica T and I always would read each others posts to get some background.  We would both put our own unique personality into our writing in order to express ourselves in what we thought. One we had finished we would always ask the other what they would think. In her writing she always put herself out there one hundred percent. She would always flat out tell you how she feels about every detail she could think of. I was always amazed by how powerful her writing could be. I could really tell how she truly felt about what she wrote. I would always try and do the same. In my opinion my own writing lacked such heart. My posts would have my personality in it but I would just give more facts than my true self and what I feel into it. We would never really criticize each other but we would just give some ideas of what the other could do. Everyday I felt my writing was more powerful and I felt I put my own feelings in more and more. If we had never started looking over each others work I don’t think I would be where I am today with my writing. I still have a long way to go I know that. But I love that I am now able to put in all the fact I need into my writing and still put in what I feel, and I am proud of that. I am very thankful of Jess. She is an amazing writer and I think that everyone could use a friend to help them review there own work. That way you can figure out what you can say so that way real people that you know will be looking at it will be able to see and feel what you write.

Posted in Cyber Journal, Uncategorized.


How To Tell a Persons Worth

Kindness and compassion are the true measure of a person’s worth. That is so true for all of the characters in the book. “Mr. Ewell stopped Atticus on the post office corner, spat in his face, and told him he would get him back if it took the rest of his life.” that is what helps determine what a person is worth. To the entire town he is now nothing but a piece of garbage. Almost the entire town loves Atticus and thinks it was very fine of him to protect Tom. Atticus protecting Tom determined how much he was worth himself. Helping out an African-American in court accused of raping a white woman. That takes a lot of courage and compassion for him to do that in a town that is “separate but equal”. Calpurnia helps out with the family and is kind to them. She sometimes gets a bit frustrated with the kids but I don’t blame her. Our parents probably did the same to us when we did the same things like that. Her being able to help out around the house is kind to all the family, neighbors, and kids just shows how much she is worth. In the African-American community she is somewhat a respected person. She knows what is right and never backs down from it. She is a very important person to Scout. Scout is a very bright individual. She cares about her family a lot and also the community. She is a little rough sometimes and gets into a couple a scrapes, but nothing to big. She always is worried about Jem what he looks sad. All these things added up show how much she is worth. In my opinion she is a very important person in the town. There are not a lot of girls in the town her age and yet she gets along just fine. The adult woman are trying to turn her more lady like and they are starting to get some results. She loves her father dearly and enjoys talking to him.

Posted in To Kill A Mockingbird.


Playlist of a twisted life

 Three Days Grace – Pain

This song really describes Tyler in this book because of all the emotional and physical fights he has throughout this book. The song talks about the agony that he faces, but that it is better to have felt the pain, then to have never felt it at all.

The Killers – When You Were Young

This song is about going through life waiting for something reat to just jump out at you so you can fix your life. Then how you look back on life and wish you could go back sometimes because of the good time you used to have. “They say the devil’s water it ain’t so sweet. You don’t have to drink right now. But you can dip your feet. Every once in a little while” Tyler takes risks through this book and I think that verse in the song sums that up nicely.

Skillet – Awake and Alive

This song is all about doing what is right even if the world doesn’t want you to or drags you down. In the last section of the book that is what Tyler does. He starts to make everything right. He even takes his dad’s gun and throws it into the river. He gets all things straight with the police. He makes things right with his family and friends.

Skillet – Hero

In this song it talks about needing someone to help you through all the issues in your life. Tyler’s friends Yoda is kind of like that, but he can’t really do anything. the entire song talkes about being on the edge and not knowing what to do, but at the same time doing what you need to do. That is another one of Tyler’s problems. In the end just like the song he puts himself in harms way and ends all the problems.

Suicide Silence – Fallen

Having thinking Tyler found the way to happiness with finally getting the girl he wanted and life was starting to get on track it all just blows up in his face. All he can feel is pain and cheated out of happiness. Feeling so close he just now feels crushed for doing what was actually right.

Escape the Fate – Not Good Enough for Truth in Cliché

Getting picked on by his old bullies, on the verge of committing suicide at one point, and losing his girl. He just wants to slow things down and leave. But he cant because otherwise thing would just get worse.

Escape the Fate – Webs We Weave

Life is down hill and lost in the lies. Tyler does not know what to do. Life is just full of trouble and he is lost in it.

Posted in Twisted.


Why Is It Important To Me?

Bing able to choose my own book for independent reading is important to me. So far for this quarter I have already finished one book. I’m really not all that much of a reader. Usually when I finish a book I say how I am glad that is over. A little over fifty percent of the time I don’t like books teachers pick out for me. But since I was able to look around to find a book I was able to find one a really enjoyed. The book that I chose for this quarter was “Twisted”. When I finished reading the book I just took a deep breath and set it down. I thought of how wonderful it was and how much I enjoyed it. It really had seemed to connect with me. Another great thing about being able to choose my own book is being able to read at my own pace. Usually when a teacher picks out a book for you have deadlines to meet for chapters. Sometimes teachers will even get angry if you read on ahead. When I get to choose my own book I get to read at my convenience. That really is important to me because then if I don’t have the time all I am able to do is skim the book and look for details. Reading might not be the most fun thing to me but I do enjoy it. It is important to me whether I am able to pick out my own book or not.

Posted in Cyber Journal.