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    Multigenre Research Reflection


    2012 - 06.01

    Multigenre Project Reflection

    I really enjoyed this project over other previous ones. What surprised me was how our inquiry question How does switching an athlete’s diet to all organic affect their abilities, health, and focus was kind of misleading. We leaned more towards vegetarianism. I didn’t expect it to be that hard to find organic information and facts about that kind of diet. Collaboration was super important through this process. You had to know who was in charge of what, to make sure it all got done. Especially when we both picked two genre pieces to create, you had to include certain things like your opinion. Some advantages were splitting up work, sometimes it’s more fun because two brains are being creative.

    I didn’t really have any disadvantages, but I know some other people had problems with time management, getting off task, not meeting deadlines, and not communicating what needs to get done. The key to success with working with a partner is to be as organized as possible. Know your responsibilities. Make lists or whatever is needed. The main idea we were trying to get across is that most people think the healthier way to live is to cut out certain foods like fats, maybe eat less portion wise to lose weight and get more fit. But! That’s not the case. You need a balanced diet. You don’t realize certain foods have vitamins and minerals your body needs. Especially athlete’s need to consume more than the average inactive person anyways.

     

    My favorite genre piece would have to be the planned menu. It gives the viewer a general idea of what a balanced diet should look like. Including all sorts of things, you have to have proteins, vitamins, minerals to perform at your best ability. I loved the annotated bibliography. It was much easier giving credit to the sources and it looks professional. I’m not the best writer either, so therefore I was thankful that we didn’t have to write a boring research paper. This whole food identity unit and the research project did change my perspective. I didn’t realize all the risks of not eating right, how to find the right diet or plan for you and your lifestyle, and what is needed to get us food from different cultures combined. Overall, this unit was great to me. I enjoyed studying this topic, basically the world revolves around food so why not learn more about it?

     

     

    Establishing Your Name


    2012 - 06.01

    Growth is what life and education are all about. In my opinion, growth in everything you do should be your ultimate goal. Everyone tries to be better or just like their friends, a celebrity, or a role model. Truth is, we are all our own people. Each and every one of us is put on this earth to be their own individuals. I have a role model, as I hope everyone does. My grandpa is the person I look up to. Well, a couple weeks ago he organized a speech at my church. The speech was given by an old friend and my cousin now in college. They both have been through a lot, their own stories, their own life experiences. The idea of the speech was to talk about choices youth face in our world today. One of the key points I took away from that speech was; What do you want your name to represent? Your name is the one thing that you own, and no one can argue that. When you hear someone say your name in the hall way or through texting, you hope what is being said is positive things, not negative. I went home that night and thought, I want people to say I’m an honest, caring, and positive person. Everyone can be who they want to be, represent their name the way they choose to.

    When we’re born, you start off as a little fraction of this world. Your body is tiny, brain is tiny, and your image in this world is tiny. Starting with preschool, kindergarten, then grade school. You have to work your way up to the top. Learning basic things like colors, body parts, addition, subtraction, shapes, etc. You slowly develop through the school years into something bigger and better. Each school is a different difficulty in things you learn. Middle school you grow into being mature enough to start high school, then after high school is the real world. Being exposed to the real world is like an incentive, you have been in school for about fourteen years, trying to be at an adult level like everyone else, to grow into what you want to be, how you want to live your life. Now you are a part of the world. You are noticed and contribute to the happenings around you. An adult, making your own decisions. Getting better in everything you do is the only way to succeed in life. Progress in the way you learn, think, act, feel.

    No one is better than everyone else. You just can’t be “number one”. You can try your best at everything you do,  practice skills to become better, grow into something bigger and better. If you ever make a mistake, change things. Everyone makes mistakes large and small. Change your ways, don’t ever repeat what you did wrong and learn from your mistakes. Get better. Be the bigger person. No one stops growing. You can always learn from experiences. So what do you want your name to represent? Who do you want to be? What do you want to do with your life? Take nothing for granted, life is short. Getting better in all you do, growing in every way, you can succeed.

    Creative Short Fiction


    2012 - 05.25

    The short fiction unit went by fast. Creating different aspects of our story with a group was a good learning experience I think we all needed. We all could offer our opinions and ideas of what we want to write about. We could create unique characters, setting, conflicts without having any boundaries. I was an active group member. Within my small group I created the characters and the other members did the setting and conflict. I think we all participated one hundred percent of the time and I wouldn’t change anything.

     

    I feel like my story meets all the requirements set. I made sure my work was done before it was due just in case. I loved the peer review process. I think it’s a good idea to get other people’s opinions on your writing, what they liked/didn’t like so you know ways to improve your story. If they didn’t like it then your readers probably won’t either. Our peers can see how creative we can be and maybe what we are interested in. Overall I thought the peer review was very helpful.

     

    “Anyways, whatever this was it landed on a fat, hairy man enjoying a popsicle next to Nigel’s stand. Poor Innocent guy. All I can see is this man’s feet hanging and sticking out of this metal piece that landed on him” “ Out stepped a beautiful blonde girl with big blue eyes, blinding everyone on the beach.” “Being brave I took a couple steps toward her. Sparky started yelping, he is a little protective and Majesty was on Nigel’s shoulders, Foo Foo behind me hiding.” These parts of my story represent characterization, I tried to give little clues to reveal what kind of character they are and how it effects them. “It was a nice day during the middle of summer, I could feel the breeze coming in my window and the warm sun beating on my skin.”
    “Out of the corner of my eye I can see little ripples in the water.” I tried to represent setting through these two lines, I could have improved that part of my story. “On the count of three we all lift.” “Nigel, you call an ambulance.” “Do you know any ways to get this thing back up there?” I asked “You know, when I was little my grandfather told me if we ever crashed we have to find some magic symbol, all I can think of his how a pearl in our culture means success.” Pandibee said. “So we need to find a magic pearl?” Nigel looked at her with confusion. “I guess so, any ideas?” Sparky is sliding towards us, “You guys!!!!!!! My friend Whale told me about two and a half miles west of here near the reef there is a clamshell there, with a guard but maybe I can be sneaky. Would you think that would entitle a magic pearl, one to get the spaceship back to the station?” “That is such a great idea Sparks, I guess we will never know until we try. Can we put you in charge of this mission? You need to be speedy. The longest is four days Sparky, or its going to be a bad ending.” Nigel answers. “I can do this. Faster than four days, with no floaties.” he promises trying to convince himself. “Friends! Here comes Sparky! This is our only hope now.” I yell as loud as I can with excitement. As he flops towards us Nigel can’t help but ask, “Any luck down there?” I represented my knowledge of dialogue a lot throughout the story with my characters communicating trying to solve the mission.

     

     

     

    Food Presence & Appreciation


    2012 - 04.27

     

    I am aware that during the week, with track, school, and church I make convenient and unhealthy food choices. On the weekends when I tend to be less busy I am eating healthier. Based on the suggested intake for teens I would say I do alright. I know for a fact I lack calcium. I like to drink water and other juices and things but after track is the only time I drink milk and maybe 2-3 times during the week for meals. My breakfasts are probably the healthiest. I try and eat a grain, protein, and a kind of fruit. Lunches depend on if I pack them or not. If I do they’re usually healthier than if I would get lunch at school. Dinners also depend how busy I am and when my parents work. If my parents work late I just grab something, probably unhealthy to eat. I would say my food balance is actually pretty good. I get most of my nutrition from my dinners and breakfasts which balances out what I eat for snacks and lunch sometimes.

    I tend to eat the most during the day. I try to eat good for breakfast but if  I don’t then I’m hungry by third hour and snack. At lunch I eat a lot and snack before track practice. At night I eat dinner and usually that is filling enough where I don’t snack after that and just go to bed. I feel like I eat during the day because I get bored. When I just sit in class and the teacher doesn’t care, I eat. The morning I usually rush so I just grab something quick and dinner is enough to fill me up so I only eat once.

     

    Dinner at my house would vary depending on the day of the week. During the work/school week we get maybe 3/5 family dinners in which are healthy and we talk about our days. On the weekend we go out to eat or mom cooks a healthy dinner. You never know what to expect at the table with a 6 year old who is full of energy and weird stories he likes making up. You also would experience an annoying dog begging for food.

    I use food to celebrate things like birthdays, confirmations, anniversaries, moving, graduations, every other holiday, school events, and sports. I think food is a part of the celebration because everyone can bring something and it makes everyone happy after they eat, right?

    Forks Over Knives Analysis


    2012 - 04.26

     

    I think so many people have had near death experiences which can push them to start making the right choices and turning their lives around. Whether their health problems are at high risk or low and can become high,  having the right attitude and wanting to stay alive you need to make the right choices and change things to make sure what you want happens. Once you make that change you can feel so much better emotionally and physically. There are so many benefits to changing your lifestyle if your current one isn’t working out. I am shocked with all the people’s stories and how their food choices almost ruined their lives. Them having positive attitudes and putting in confidence to change things around is eye opening and can help many people. You don’t know things are that bad until you get tested and then your problems become reality, you either have a choice to fix everything or just keep living like you are but not for long or the best to your ability. You are in charge of your own life and the decision to make the right choice is up to you. There are many resources and places to go to get further information or join diet plans. There is a big power you have to find within yourself to try new things and can experience a better life for you and the ones who care about you. Eat to live, don’t live to eat. I feel motivated to help myself and others.

    I learned so much watching the documentary Forks Over Knives. I never really thought about what food was entering my mouth constantly. Coming from Wisconsin, I eat meat way more than I should. I really can’t think of a day where I don’t eat meat. I know during breakfast I usually will not eat meat but every other meal for every day has some kind of animal product like meat. I learned how this is not the healthy route to take! I won’t give up meat completely, but for sure I won’t  eat it as often as usual. I didn’t realize all the health risks involved in eating more animal products rather than plant based foods. So many diets now days are ruining our society and bringing everyone’s health down. This is such a big issue if you have unhealthy eating habits and people need to be more aware of the consequences.

    I don’t have many questions regarding the documentary. One question I know may never be answered is how we can get more people aware of this issue and get them willing to change their lifestyles. It disappoints me knowing future generations will probably be worse than now, which is hard to imagine. I don’t know if we could find any other ways to help get rid of animal products partially in our diets, try to keep some in our system but not like usual.

    Wonderful Modern Learning


    2012 - 02.10

    Ipads, Ipods, Smart Phones, Kindles, laptops, projectors, smartboards and more can surprisingly help enhance our learning. The idea of an ideal cyber school inspires me. I see children, smiling ear to ear. I can sense what they are thinking, “We can finally use our electronics in a school learning environment without getting into trouble.” Each student is holding their most favorite electronic device. This can also help them feel comfortable if this device is something they use daily. The new thing for electronics is touch screen. In my cyber school kids will feel the soft and shiny screens of their favorite electronic. Touch screen was a great invention. In school touch screen works great for games and so the teacher can be standing by the smart board or projecting something from an Ipad for instance and not have to be sitting in the computer desk. I believe this can help those who learn better by hands on learning and can make others feel more involved. I can hear the students helping each other out on the latest cyber news or about where to find certain answers. Starting with IPods and IPads, they are my favorite electronics. IPads can be used like laptops, but offer much more. They offer different learning Apps that are quick and easily accessible.I prefer an IPod or IPad rather than a laptop because on an IPod all you have are two touches, one to unlock the screen and one to go to the internet app, rather than finding laptops, waiting for it to start up, log in, then wait for the internet. Using IPods can seriously save time. Teachers and/or students would use these. Each student would have one and each teacher. This could be very convenient for teachers with uploading grades, blogs, or checking on other things. Kindles and smart phones could be used for the same thing. Kindles offer more of the reading opportunities but the smart phone would work the same way. Projecters help the teacher teach the students by projecting information from their laptop or other device that is worth sharing. These electronics can also be very important communication tools, it would be quite simple to send a quick email about a concern you would have, etc. The technology used by my school is the best because we all are on the same page, we all communicate regularly, and are up to date on all assignments, we all can talk about upcoming events and how to prepare for them, and can have something to connect with. These devices are what we have grown up with, and what we are used to, if we have the right rules, I believe this way of learning would succeed and prove a lot about modern day society.

    Critical Thinking Reflection- A great project


    2011 - 12.07

    Critical Thinking Reflection

    This unit was very interesting and hands on. I researched the topic money. From the beginning this wasn’t my choice to do this topic, but I got it anyways. Now looking back on it I’m thankful I got something to research that I didn’t know much about. I learned so many new things. I never really thought about how money adds stress to our daily lives and how much we need it to succeed. Money is important in our modern society. This project makes me re think how I want to spend money and how to congregate between wants and needs. There are so many things to do in this world and spend your money on that are worth more than always getting what you want, like volunteer work and buying supplies for people who have a difficult time surviving. If I could go back, I wouldn’t change my topic for anything. This really impacted my life. Love and faith are keys to success,  not money.

    For group work, I was put in charge of finding articles, drawing an image and finding quotes that could better represent our claim. I think we all did a good job working together to get what needed to be done, done. I rate myself at an 8 out of ten because I missed a day, while my group typed up our presentation.

    Most of the images in our poster were represented in our writing. We tried to find images that go along with our claim. We had some ways to get jobs and a list of how to understands morals and values. Some pictures were included, and also a graph showing what teens most spend their money on. If I could change one thing on our poster it would be a better list on things teens can do to feel better about themselves, and do something good for someone else instead of for themselves. That would have made more sense than the list on ways to educate. My favorite part of the poster was the visual at the top, of the parents on one side and teen on the other of the broken heart. This showed how money can tear apart relationships, and that family should be more important than buying the latest items.

    In our presentation, I was in charge of explaining the visuals. We practiced our presentation and typed what we were going to say on the back of the poster. It was equally divided and I think it worked out well. My favorite part was the last part of our essay on how to make yourself feel better about spending money and to value other things over something else because that is what our claim was about.

    The other presentation I really enjoyed would have to be social networking. Their visual was outstanding and I could follow everything that was being explained. It was very informative. That was also my favorite poster, because it represented everything they said and they knew what they were talking about. I learned that social networking can be fun, but there are so many ways to damage your life and you have to be careful. What is said on the internet can come back to you.

    Overall, this was a great project to do and expanded my horizons on some of the latest issues and how to solve them.

     

     

     

     

    Writer’s Reflection


    2011 - 11.01

     

    Reflection on Writing

     

    Writing is a huge part of my life. When I want to write, most times I don’t know what to write about. Usually I write about past experiences and how they impacted my life, positively or negatively. Sometimes I have to write about things my teachers or family want me to write about. In my opinion writing is all about reflection. You can reflect upon experiences, who you are, what and why things happened the way they did, who inspires you, other personal things. It’s hard for me to decide whether being told what to write about or me choosing what to write is more enjoyable. Sometimes I can’t think about what to write about, therefore being told what to write about would help me immensely.  Other times I really enjoy choosing a topic to write about so I can inform other people of my creativity. My most favorite piece of writing was done in seventh grade about my mom. I enjoyed writing about her and her death because it helped me overcome my pain and I was able to express my feelings and explain what happened. I also could say how I am going to live my life positively from now on and not be caught in sorrow. I enjoy writing. During the writing process, I feel really happy. I like being creative and trying to exceed my reader’s expectations. When I create good writing pieces I feel proud. I sometimes worry what my reader thinks about my style but it doesn’t matter. As long as I am proud and think I did a satisfactory job, then I’m ok with it. Although, it is great if I can please myself and engage my reader. Sharing my writing with peers is a good way to get feedback on what they like or what you can improve. More than likely they won’t judge you and if they do, everyone is different and has different style and creativity. Writing on the computer and on paper is the same in my opinion. You still can be the writer you want to be. You can be creative and have an interesting style whether you’re typing your thoughts or writing them by hand. I like to write my thoughts on paper and then type just to make sure I have enough to engage my reader. I write because it is a type of reflection. Writing helps me reflect on past and present and explain my thoughts. One goal I have is to keep enjoying writing and to find other ways to help my reader understand the purpose of my writing.

    Hypetext/Personal Essay Reflection


    2011 - 11.01

    The past two months have been busy! I have learned so much compared to how we learned in middle school. Our first lesson was on hypertext. This unit was interesting. I learned how to use hypertext, when it is appropriate to use, how it benefits the writer and the reader, and how it help improve the text. In my opinion, hypertext is a great way to have the reader connect to your writing. This helps you create more background knowledge also. They can better understand what is going on by using a hypertext either a visual or a description. This also helps the text become more interesting instead of just reading a long writing piece and getting off track. I really enjoyed writing about a personal experience. It’s always nice being able to take a break from reflecting off of a reading piece. This helps us expand our knowledge and  maybe go back in time and remember some great times we have had. It’s a good thing to reflect on yourself and your life sometimes and helps you become a stronger person and seeing your life as a gift. What I liked most about creating my personal essay was the freedom to writing about what you want, but under a category. For instance, I wrote about my mission trip this past summer and the category was my most significant experience. I like reflecting on personal experiences and writing about them so my reader knows how the experience impacted my life and what I would like to do in the future. From these experiences, I learned I can write about whatever I want as long as I think about my reader and the level they are at and how I can have them connect and understand my writing.

    Courtney’s Life and Interests


    2011 - 09.08

    Hi, my  name is Courtney. I am a student at Sheboygan Falls High. I live with my dad Mike and step-mom Kelly. I have two brothers; Cody and Wiley. They are great brothers to me and keep me smiling. My family loves to do things together. We enjoy fishing on my dad’s boat, going to movies, eating out, going to County events together,  going snowmobiling, getting together for holidays,  and having parties. One person I admire is my step-mom because she knows me very well and we have similar interests.

     

    In high school, I want to be a confident student. I want to get all A’s and try my best. I plan on joining Key Club, and maybe some other clubs.  I might try out for basketball and track this year. I do plan on going to college. I don’t know where yet but somewhere that has an excellent nursing program. I ensure that I will be successful , stay organized, and try my best to get into a good college that’s right for me. When I grow up I want to go into the medical field. Preferably a pediatrician or RN. I really enjoy meeting new people and helping people. I don’t like seeing people uncomfortable or unhappy so I want this career to try and help people get back on track. If I could visit any place in the world I would go to Italy. I have an obsession of  Italian food and it’s just my dream to go there. During my free time I enjoy hanging out with friends and family, volleyball, basketball, running, dancing, snowmobiling, going to the beach, and mostly shopping. My favorite movie of all time is Homecoming.